This week we met up with kieron and had a group meeting. Kieron thought it needed better structure, which may be a good idea to make sure the audience watching knows EXCATELY what is going on. We suggested together how things could fit in more and make more sense in terms of shots and story.

Kieron did suggest that we may need to have more dialogue in order to better set up the tv show. I completely agreed that this would make sense as the way it is now isn’t entirely obvious to the audience, although unfortunately Daryl didn’t wish to ask the voice artists for more sound. I personally felt that it was worth having, even if it meant finding another voice artist but unfortunately Daryl could not be swayed with the idea and so we had to settle with the ones we have.